Comments : Another Lottery Ticket

  • 17 years ago

    by donna

    Haha that was funny lol.. sad that some people really do do that though.. Great job on this.. Excellent Well done 5/5 xx

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Kinda sketchy on the rhyming, but I love the overall thought. Such a waste of money on such a little chance.
    Charisma*

  • 17 years ago

    by N M Lambert

    This is hilarious i loved it!!! very true to life too. well done x

  • 17 years ago

    by DarkJem

    Great poem :) keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by Lu

    Jeannie,
    Girl you penned an awesome poem here. You've added a little giggle to my day.

    disconnected from reality.
    ^^^
    Love this ending line.
    Been there, did that .....and bought the ticket ...lol

    A great read Jeannie !

  • 17 years ago

    by Kirsty palmer

    Lol.. i liked this poem, a fun senc of humor to play with. I loved the fact it was over a lottery ticket... cause its different and unique. i felt that your others were written a bit better, as i felt that some words were kind of forced.. but stilla great write.. well done keep it up.
    I Hope To get some advise from u on my poems. take care and keep writing
    Love Kirsty xx