I wish i could put into words how my bf makes me feel when he hugs me! you did an amazing job. i know just how it feels. bravo

This is really beautiful. I loved the imergery you used in it. The flow was smooth and everything just turned out great. I only suggest that you use punctuation in some parts of the poem where it's needed; and capitalize the single I. Everything eles looks great. Keep up the great work.

Letty

*Imagery. Sorry about the misspelling in the first comment. : )

I remember when I felt that way. I can't wait to feel that way again but I'm sure it will be some time before that happens :( You did a wonderful job on the poem. Keep writing!