Nobody cared.

by Dave   Feb 7, 2008


He cried out for help, no one was there,
nobody listened, they didn't care.
People kept walking further away,
leaving him with no one to wipe the tears away.
he looked for a friend, nobody came,
nobody liked him, there was no one to blame.
All those years with nobody loving him,
really hurt, and made his dreams all a blur.
His future looked hopeless, a deep dark black,
people always stabbing him in the back.
Soon he grew tired of the hatred and pain,
said, "I'm leaving here, there's nothing for me to gain."
he left with a bang, stunning everyone,
killing himself with his father's gun.
Everyone laughed, nobody cried,
it was a party when he died,
One lonely boy, killing himself and so scared,
just because nobody cared.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    I really loved this poem. It was written so well. I loved the flow and your sytle is so simple that it makes it easier to understand what you're saying. Very emotional. I loved it. Nice work. Shanik

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    by shymira wright

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  • 16 years ago

    by Melody Christina

    Gosh so sad =(

    Beautifully written!

    5/5!

    *Melody*

  • 16 years ago

    by dawn green

    Very nice write!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Raychil

    This poem was beautiful. The imagery was amazing, very detailed and yet the rhythm was so smooth. I loved it. I hope you keep writing with such emotion. I only hope you realize people do love and care about you no matter what we think sometimes. I've felt this way often, so I'm here to talk if you need a friend.
    <3Raych

    Thanks for commenting on my poem.

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