"But life had been giving her a very hard time
And the mountain of troubles was just to high to climb"
** So Beautiful**

Wow Constance;

This poem tops them all if i must say i think you even out did yourself its so honest and true and sad. I like how the ending wasn't how i thought it would be thanks for the message its a wonderful peice of art

So I'll leave it at this 5.5

Wow;;
i loved it.

=D

Wow ! this is awesome !!
5/5 again

your v talentd too :-)

keep up the work
the poem is bringing out a story...
gr8 work

love
amy

So tragic. Needless death always moves me. I just don't know what to say. 5/5

Oh my... the poem made my jaw drop! What a twist! I'm still in shocked by what happened at the end. The poem was absolutely amazing and I could just picture the entire thing playing in my head like a movie. Great rhyming, I loved every single line. Truly an amazing poet. Never stop writing, doll. 5/5 <3 <3 <3 <3

~Kayla~