This is truly a beautifully, sad, written poem. I loved every single word of it. The flow was once again flawless and the imagery once again perfect. There is only one error in the last line from where you copied and pasted. Other than that minor error this is another perfect example of your magnificent talent. After you have corrected the small error, this one is definitely going in my favorite poems. Keep up the good work.

Letty

I'm sorry but there isn't an error. I thought I saw one, but I must have been mistaken. Keep up the great work!

Letty

P.S. This is perfect

This is actually a very good poem in terms of how it's written. I can relate to your feelings as well. Right now, I'm on a new road on my life. And I hope one day a special friend of mine will join me. I was a fool myself in regards to a former female friend. But right now, I view myself as a man instead of a fool. And we all can't worry about the past.

You're excellent at writing sad poems and with the way you express your feelings.