A Delicate Rose

by Alexandra Jade Brewer   Feb 7, 2008


I would send you a red rose
To tell you how much I love you
To convey all I feel
But a red rose just won't do

I would send you a lavender rose
To describe my love at first sight
All the beauty I fell mad in love for
But a lavender rose just isn't right

I would send you an orange rose
So you know this is something I'll pursue
To point out all of my passion
But it won't make my words come through

So instead I give you a glass rose
And you make ask me "why?"
This rose is the most delicate
Our love it goes beyond the sky

This glass rose will never die
Its beauty will live on forever
Like all my love for you
Now isn't this glass rose clever

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Loving singers contest
    :

    well it is one of the best i read , but you remmber the rhyming is a rule , and the ryming is not good in theis poem ,
    so it si a major disadvantage
    other tehn that it si nice easy and very close to heart,

    i love it!

  • 16 years ago

    by Punk Princess

    An amazing poem ! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni

    This was an excellent poem, once again there were a few flow problems and it was sometimes difficult to follow. Try to make your syllables close together. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by KJ

    Awww how cute. Out of all the poems I've read by you, this is by far my favorite. I wouldn't change a thing about it. The last stanza was by far the best part. Very good job.
    Beautifully and perfectly written
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Aww cute i love the different color roses for different things it brings a different feel to the poem and its nice lovely job 5/5

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