Comments : A Delicate Rose

  • 16 years ago

    by TheRapture03

    Wow. that was really good. This definitely shows alot of love for him too. I love the idea of a glass rose will 'never die' Way to go. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Wow that was really unique! I loved how you wrote that. I don't think you should change one single thing; it's perfect the way it is! I'm sure your boyfriend will absolutely love it!

    Keep writing!
    Cayce

  • 16 years ago

    by HidinVictim

    AWWWW.... this is sooo cute, and sweet. i love the usage of the color meanings that was really smart, and the ending was really special to... very good he should love it... 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by jLegendc

    Awww... what a really nice poem... i don't know if i can make this poem better.. it's already fantastic.. you gave me an idea of a poem tho.. hehe.. from beginning to end.. it's marvelous! the ending was funny.. "now isn't this glass rose clever?" lol
    great poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Aww cute i love the different color roses for different things it brings a different feel to the poem and its nice lovely job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by KJ

    Awww how cute. Out of all the poems I've read by you, this is by far my favorite. I wouldn't change a thing about it. The last stanza was by far the best part. Very good job.
    Beautifully and perfectly written
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni

    This was an excellent poem, once again there were a few flow problems and it was sometimes difficult to follow. Try to make your syllables close together. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Punk Princess

    An amazing poem ! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Loving singers contest
    :

    well it is one of the best i read , but you remmber the rhyming is a rule , and the ryming is not good in theis poem ,
    so it si a major disadvantage
    other tehn that it si nice easy and very close to heart,

    i love it!