by TheRapture03
Wow. that was really good. This definitely shows alot of love for him too. I love the idea of a glass rose will 'never die' Way to go. 5/5 |
Wow that was really unique! I loved how you wrote that. I don't think you should change one single thing; it's perfect the way it is! I'm sure your boyfriend will absolutely love it! |
by HidinVictim
AWWWW.... this is sooo cute, and sweet. i love the usage of the color meanings that was really smart, and the ending was really special to... very good he should love it... 5/5 |
by jLegendc
Awww... what a really nice poem... i don't know if i can make this poem better.. it's already fantastic.. you gave me an idea of a poem tho.. hehe.. from beginning to end.. it's marvelous! the ending was funny.. "now isn't this glass rose clever?" lol |
by Kaila
Aww cute i love the different color roses for different things it brings a different feel to the poem and its nice lovely job 5/5 |
by KJ
Awww how cute. Out of all the poems I've read by you, this is by far my favorite. I wouldn't change a thing about it. The last stanza was by far the best part. Very good job. |
by Jenni
This was an excellent poem, once again there were a few flow problems and it was sometimes difficult to follow. Try to make your syllables close together. 5/5 |
An amazing poem ! 5/5 |
by Mister 47
Loving singers contest |