Azure Eyes ( Naani )

Wow... very effective. You managed to say so much and to create truly amazing imagery. Breathtaking poem, very original and vivid. Every word is perfectly picked.
Keep up!

Nice. in just four lines you told alot of things. Ok maybe a few but still ^^
A Girl Crying.
She has blue eyes.
These things were told along with a few more. =P
I thought its awesum. Short sweet and to the point. xD
5/5

-Ally