Nice. in just four lines you told alot of things. Ok maybe a few but still ^^
A Girl Crying.
She has blue eyes.
These things were told along with a few more. =P
I thought its awesum. Short sweet and to the point. xD
5/5

-Ally

Wow... very effective. You managed to say so much and to create truly amazing imagery. Breathtaking poem, very original and vivid. Every word is perfectly picked.
Keep up!