That was absolutly amazing. You are a brilliant writer. I feel the emotion displayed in this its very deep and sad. brilliant

Wow.. das all i havta say.. wow.. amazing

O.O!!!!!!!!! That last stanza is AMAZING!! I do like you poetry quite a bit. I just want you to know to hang in there, and there is always someone out there who is willing to listen. They may not be there now, but life has many turnarounds. Hang in there, okay? ^____^!!! 5/5!!

Wow tht poem is so powerfull, i can really feel what ur sayin. chin up. be strong x

This poem was just simply amazing. I loved every bit of it. Great job

In a word < EXCELLENT> everything about
this piece is real and its the reality of it that makes it shine. METALLICA sings it best
< sad but true> 5/5