Fluorescent Eyes

by .K.i.T.t.Y.   Feb 8, 2008


Crystal blue pools glisten
Against fluorescent lights,
As I watch his lips move silently,
Speaking words I try hard to grasp.

For a month now
His freedom of speech
Has been stripped away,
In hopes of improvement.

Whether he's telling me he loves me,
Misses me,
Or asks the time,
I just can't understand.

But I can understand the look
He expresses in his eyes,
As he tries to get
Something important across.

His tired blue eyes
Burn through mine,
Melting all the strength
I barely have left.

Pain, love, and fear
Suffocate the earnest light
His adoring eyes once held,
As he watches me watch him.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ray Blue

    Excellent ~

    His tired blue eyes
    Burn through mine,
    Melting all the strength
    I barely have left.

    5/5. I liked this lines. Keep on writting!

  • 16 years ago

    by Travis

    I love it. It's just so.. Nice, sweet, and stuff.

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    The imagery here really captured my attention and had me hooked from beginning to end.

    "As I watch his lips move silently,
    Speaking words I try hard to grasp."
    ^I loved how this flowed and painted a picture I could relate with ... beautiful.

    The last two lines were the perfect way to end your poem. Overall it was a beautiful write. Well done *5/5*

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