What we see and what others don't

by cruz   Feb 8, 2008


Believe is the message i
want to send to everybody
no matter what some people
that i know see things that other
can't see and we can't do anything
about it . i know you might get a little
frustrated but trust me you'll be doing the
right thing. those kind of people need help
i know how it feels your mind tries to make it up
thats what everybody says. no i know it's not your
mind it's you eyes and your eyes don't lie they speak
in a way we don;t know and you may say my eyes are lying to me but there are not they are speaking the truth but you don't know how to listen you don't see what you become and try to fix it soon people get hurt i know. don't hide it doctors make things worst for these
people don't take pills you confront it even if you die you'll die with strength don't hide in there unless it's not paranormal don't do anything ok

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  • 16 years ago

    by Letty

    I'm sorry, but I really didn't get the message that you were trying to make in this poem. It's sort of confusing. It seems like you're jumping around in the poem from one message to the other. I also think you need to break it up to make it easier on the eyes. I don't know if it's the lack of punctuation or the words that seem to be missing from this piece. I truly suggest you go over this poem again and do some major editing then resubmit it. I will be more than happy to reread it and then vote. Until then I wish you the best of luck on your writing.

    Letty

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