My Kitten

by Beautiful Forever   Feb 8, 2008


I moved out, on my own,
No friends, I was all alone,
I wanted my loneliness to end,
So one day, I got a new friend,

He came to me as a furry thing,
Soft and cuddly with happiness to bring,
Then he would take a nap, so adorable,
But when he woke up, he was horrible,

He found everything he could to destroy,
So I decided to buy him a new toy,
But in his games it was just another pawn,
Like everything else, soon to be gone,

I was so confused, I got mad,
How could this kitty be so bad?,
I tried to make him behave,
But the results were very grave,

Now he was the angry one,
And this kitty was no longer fun,
Scratching and biting my skin,
My patience was wearing thin,

But then I noticed the cute things he does,
And realized I haven't felt alone because,
He's the best friend I could ever ask for,
Even though he can be, a little hardcore.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni

    I found this poem to be very funny! I laughed about halfway through, you should have put this in the humorous section. You were able to describe the friendship you have with your kitten, but also make it light and funny in order to entice your reader. Very good poem. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Good Enough

    In the 4th and 5th stanzau lost the beat but it was still really good

  • 16 years ago

    by Em

    Aww, I love your poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by Romancing the Darker Side

    I have a kitty just like yours. =]
    I like how you describe your situation. The details make it more exciting, and I absolutely love the last two lines, but I think you should take the comma out of the last line. Also, your flow was a little off, but not by much, so no big deal.
    Overall, I liked your poem. I could really feel how much you love your cat. =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Katy

    Lol very cute poem!!!