Ooh its very cute and well written. some of the words are funny, like i dont know why you chose them exactly, but the rhyme scheme is nice regardless of the simplicity.

Aw aw awwwwwwwwwwwwwww. That's pretty much all I've got to say. Haha, just kidding. I have a kitty, and I adore him. He's my best friend, and this poem reminds me of him. The flow was pretty good, and I liked the rhymes, they didn't seem forced at all. Great jobb! Haha, I'm in a nice mood today. o.o

Keep writing!
Cayce

LOL awww this is so cute =) Hardcore kitty, very sweet and a fun read. 5/5 for this yay!

Em xXx

Lol very cute poem!!!

I have a kitty just like yours. =]
I like how you describe your situation. The details make it more exciting, and I absolutely love the last two lines, but I think you should take the comma out of the last line. Also, your flow was a little off, but not by much, so no big deal.
Overall, I liked your poem. I could really feel how much you love your cat. =]

Aww, I love your poem!

In the 4th and 5th stanzau lost the beat but it was still really good

I found this poem to be very funny! I laughed about halfway through, you should have put this in the humorous section. You were able to describe the friendship you have with your kitten, but also make it light and funny in order to entice your reader. Very good poem. 5/5