by Amazed By You Feb 8, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Forever |
by Heather
This poem is really good and i really like it all except you repeat a bunch of things over and over again and it gets boring to read. Maybe you could change it up a little bit and fix it. Then it will be even better. But I'm not trying to be mean, I'm just trying to help. |