It Cuts Deep

by Kim   Feb 8, 2008


One cut, how much I love you,
Two cuts, it's just the same,
Three cuts, how much i miss you,
Four cuts, it will never be the same again.

Five cuts, can't really feel a thing,
Six cuts, I start to bleed,
Seven cuts, you must come back,
This is not a want, but a need.

Eight cuts, it's starting to hurt,
Nine cuts, I'm feeling weak,
I lift the knife and strike again,
Ten cuts, am I a freak?

Eleven cuts, I'm nearly done,
Twelve cuts, I'm on my way,
Thirteen cuts, the unlucky cut,
I guess my life ends today.

Fourteen cuts, can barely move,
Fifteen cuts, I lay on the floor,
Sixteen cuts, it's eating me away,
I can't cut anymore.

Seventeen cuts, I'm really faint,
Eighteen cuts, time for war paint,
Nineteen cuts, I brave a smile,
And I'm sure I'll see you in a while.

Twenty cuts, one too many,
I can see my bone,
But I guess I still don't really care,
Because now I'm with you and I'll never be alone.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Hidden1

    This gave me a WHOAAA reaction. It seems like you were having a mental battle in your mind about what you wanted to do. Stuff hurts bad, but you can stay strong, endure and make it through. Don't be selfish and retreat by yourself, other's out there need you and are looking to you for help. You may be alone, you may even cry sometimes. Know that's it's ok and when you are done smile, relax and say. "I've shed my tears, the pain I still feel, You may be gone from me, but the memories sto me are real. Stay encouraged. Good word play though.

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