Im walking next to you loser!!! how r u walking by yourself!!

It really is beautifully written. Exellent choice of words!

Oh wow...I'm sorry you feel that way about someone you don't have anymore...but it's a good poem...and I I'm not sure if you wanted that word in this line

"I sit here wishing to here theses untimely words of love."

Isn't "theses" supposed to be "These"? but anyways still a good write lol.

This was an amzingly inspiring poem. I'm so glad you comented me or else I never would have found it.

"I sit here outraged because I'm still in love with thee enemy."
^^^this line is something that caught my eye. I can tell then u really can relate to the struggle I've been through. Your way f expression through your work is amazing. keep writing. 5/5
kat

Loneliness after being with someone is too hard to deal with i can tell that but be aware that you still alive which means you still can (and will for sure) find your other half. the real half who will share true love with you

good poem, it shows pain and love at the same time

Good job. liked it alot. keep up the good work. 5/5

xoxoxo
Jess