Wow!! I like this one. It has really good emotion and tells a story that some people can really relate to and the ones that can't get a sense of it.. Great job:D Love ya

Beck

I almost cried...the emotions were so strong....I loved it. Please keep writing. You have alot of talent
5/5

-Ally

WOOOOOTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 - jessie :)

Very deep poem :) ---->Thuy

Deep as the Blue sea -----> Graham