An exellent poem, i gave it a defanate 5

Iwould fix two things though, ill paste what you have and then ill capitalize suggested fixes

waiting for the day she will no have wear a frown
Her life is being shadowed by a nightmare
nothing happening seems fair

waiting for the day she will noT have TO wear a frown
Her life is being shadowed by a nightmare
nothing happening seems TO BE fair

nothing magor. once again Awsome peom. Ive written two poems my self please vote on them and comment if you like my work. later