Its lovely and well written. the simplicity of rhyme scheme adds a natural flare that makes it so cute.

Nice choice of words! Keep up the good work.

Hey hunn... havent talked for ever!!!! :è( how have u been these daysÉ miss u

An amazing piece. and a very enjoyable read. your choice of words were outstanding and the flow was absolutely flawless. this piece was heartfelt and very deep. the emotions were spectacular. 5/5.

Seriously i hav nothing else to say.. i've ran out of things to say.. lol.. all i can say is WOW! *applause*
you're going into my favs =]

Ahhhh I loved this!! Wow hun this just made my day because that final line truly summed up everything I feel right now into a few words ... amazing! I loved how effortlessly everything just flowed .. it flowed naturally from you heart and it showed. The imagery was beautiful and I was captivated.

"Wishes and dreams are pouncing on my shoulder,
and the confusion is chipping away at my mind.
Because this sudden realization is suffocating me,
and I'm still scared to see what I'll one day find."
^Beautifully written stanza that made the poem competed for me. Well done, you have to be one of my fave authors on this site. *5/5*