My safe haven (a true story)

by Ingrid   Feb 8, 2008


In the depth's of my soul exists a secret place,
created long ago when still an infant at age four
I needed a shelter from this cruel and vicious world
At that day so long ago I almost drowned, chilled to the core

As I lay there in the pond a world opened up
I saw myself sitting by a lake at sunset
A picture so serene and as my body became heavy
and it turned in the water I was relaxed, not even upset

Floating on my tummy I stepped into this new dimension
watching the birds fly high into the sky, singing cheerfully
I started to doze off, warmed by the last rays of the sun
Never had I felt more tranquil, relaxation came naturally

My father rescued me from a certain death that day
I was too young to realize how near the gates of heaven
my young soul had been..my mind went off wandering
in this new world of beauty and magic, all sins forgiven

As I grew older the place became my safe haven
I always went there alone, to be at ease
One with nature, watching birds fly off into the sunset
My serene world, captivating in all its splendor with its eternal breeze

No matter how hard life came down on me,
I was untouchable in this place of my own
My young body got bruised and abused so many times,
but in this paradise I was safe, the only sanctuary I have ever known

One day when I was there a miracle happened
A man joined me, the most beautiful creature I had ever seen
He took my face within his hands and said to me:
I will be with you until the end of time, my precious fairy queen

And so, from that day onward there were two small
creatures by the lake at sunset lying in the sand
cuddled up together in an eternal embrace,
so in love with eachother.. until the very end

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  • 16 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    Ingrid,
    This was such an enchanting piece. That wondrous place we all go to find our peace. Then to be comforted by the presence of another whether it be physical, mental or spiritual is the ultimate reward for eternal peace. Beautiful write.

  • 16 years ago

    by Elapsed

    This piece was such a pleasure to read, full of wonderful images. To have a place as such is truly a blessing, never let go of this place and always keep it safe.

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Ingrid
    Wonderful Imagery. Excellent job on this tale put to verse. We all need that place where we can go when life gets rough.
    Great job!
    Love cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    It's well written poem, the imagination were put in this poem were beautiful. while i was reading it i went through this fairy tale like i lived it.

    i liked the choice of words too

    "One day when I was there a miracle happened
    A man joined me, the most beautiful creature I had ever seen
    He took my face within his hands and said to me:
    I will be with you until the end of time, my precious fairy queen"
    my best part

  • 16 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Wow, its been long since i read any of your poem and i am not surprised by the magic you still put in your poems, this is awesome, great imagination and selection of words, just loved it.

    all the best and take care