Nice work
I really loved the last line. it was my favorite. you had a few errors. 1. Get rid of the symbals and everything it's a distraction to the beauty of this poem. 2. the last line in the third stanza you said "everything thing.." just a little reminder otherwise the flow was pretty good average emotion this poem gets..
4/5
kaila

I loved it. Very emotional and good word choice. The story is sweet and simple. ^.^ I am going to point out a few things though. Each of your apostraphes (') have been replaced by some weird symbol things. I'm guessing you copied and pasted it from word or something like that. I also wanted to say that in the third stanza, last line you have
"..everything thing you..."
I suggest you either get rid of the second "thing" or replace it with "that"
Other than that, I loved reading it. 5/5

Awww this is wonderful, truely special, who ever your talking about is a very special guy, great job.... 5/5