Poem of Mine

by benjamin   Feb 9, 2008


Into the Darkness

Down farther we go

We fight with our foe

A never ending war

Evil is the key

Loose control

Reach for his soul

But you want more

Power over him

Take his soul out

And watch him fall

He becomes numb

It consumes his being

He starts fleeing

Against his body's will to move

Pouring his blood All over like a flood

Staggering and standing just to stay alive

A life more miserable than mine

A lonely mile just to get home

To want to dive

Into another world

somewhere where it is ok to loose control

Somewhere where it is ok to have no soul

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  • 16 years ago

    by Wereallbladesarntwe

    Hi i like this and the way you set it out, made me feel i was falling off a tall building, wierd but good, P

  • 16 years ago

    by Live WeLL

    This is great.. i love the short statements.. they really help the poem to flow nicely.. nice job!.. thanks for the comment =)

  • 16 years ago

    by 1Mistake

    I really loved how you put that together! that was really awesome!! great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Dragon Slayer

    Great work on this