Is this a true story? the poem's good, saddening, but good.
rachael=)

Thats a very dedicated poem well done xx

Yes this is a true story I am sad to say. It only happened last sunday. He really did take the curb to fast and died instantly. Thank you guys for the comment they are appreciated.

Hey thats really good

well done

and its sad

thanks 4 da comment too xx

I think this is a great poem, its really easy to write about someting so tragic in today's world. keep it up 5/5