I love the nature of this poem, I love the flow, and I love the intimacy feeling combined with the actions going on in the poem. It's almost like watching a program for men only, That's how I view this cool poem.

Pretty cool, check out some of my poems

Wow!!! You turned up the heat on my end. LOL. I loved it! It kind of reminded me of an explicit DR. Seuss rhyme. LOL. Keep up the great work Hun!

Letty

X] You know I love it.
Great job, and not just with the turning me on part. Lol.

It has great flow, babe.
Great word choice, great imagery.
You did a great job with it. x]
Flawlesss.

5/5

Great poem. i love the rhyme sceam.

5/5

WOW!!!!! I like this poem!!!! Rough sex is a great thing I love it when it's done right. This is a very hot and sexy poem.

Great poem. It reminded me of a fast rap song; the flow was good and the material was great. I like that you didnt use complex words or get to out-of-the-ordinary with it. Its a good poem with plenty of meaning.