by biancaa
Oh hun He loves you for who you are. He created you and you know there are so many people who give up on Him, but you won't because your stronger and He sees that in you.Your his child and He really does love you!! don't ever forget it. great poem! |
by StandStill
I love this poem. and hunni, god always loves you. forever. he knows why u screwed up and he knows how u feel. all u need to do is say im sorry and say that he is your god and u r his. i will pray for u lovey, and if u have any questions pm me!! |
It is your choice to love god, not gods choice to love you. you are who you are, and that should never change, and if anyone ever tells you otherwise, they are the 'sinners'. great words, great emotion. use writing as your scapegoat...the only thing that should be able to judge you is your own mind. |
by shelby lynne
I've read about 3 of your peoms..I'm Most def. going to read more. I love each one for different reasons. Each reason you write them, Each way you express yourself. you have true talent....True sadness and hurt expressed in words, written down for the world to see. You might not see it, but that makes you strong. putting these thoughs and emotions on paper...Letting the world see the real you...That takes strength..took me years to realize that.... |
I really loved your poem. It've beautiful, but you should separate it into lines a bit more. If u need help with it, send me a PM, and I will help out. 5/5 |
Speechless. absolutly speechless. words alone can't explain the talent and emosin u put in2 this 1. 5/5! |
by pookiengurgi
Touching. Reminds me of a close friend of mine..she would have loved this poem |
by Hermosa
The lord does not judge anyone! HE accepts you for who you are |
by XxHiis BooxX
Hey, |
by 3sA SaNcHa
Luv this one!! |
by emiley
Wow sweets its so understandable. you can only make yourself happy. just remember its your life and your life only. only you can control what you wear, eat, drink, think, and who you love. its your turn to live so live it how you want to live it. dont let anyone else try to control you expecially your parents. your parents gave you life to live it for yourself. so forget what they want from you do what makes you happy. |
A very nice poem in an interesting situation and topic that is yet to be touched by the world 5/5 |
by Baby Rainbow
Great poem hunny, good subject and you write about it well. keep it up xx |