Very interesting poem, I like it, it is so much positive, I enjoyed in every line.
It posses some simplicity but you still managed to express emotions on a fantastic way.
Well done, bravo.

This poem is very deep and i like that. You made it personal. I think that going back to memories can help us remember who we were or still are. I also like how it was just the right length. You didnt make it to long, i think it would have taken away from the simplicity of it. Great vocabulary as well!
Well done!

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Letty, very nice. The only thing that threw me was the way you started and ended with a rhyming pattern and ditched it in the second stanza. It's not a bad thing, and it just threw me off a bit.

You opened the poem with an -amazing- metaphor. I love it, and I can't stress that enough. And you wrapped it up nicely at the end. Great job; I don't even need to tell you that you're talented because it's just so blatantly obvious.

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I Like This..
Its Personal But Something You Can Relate To As Well.
The Last Sanza Finished It Nicely.
Ahh You Have Great Writing Skills =] x

I was away for awhile and i have missed many great poems by great poets... and this poem is one of them..
im so glad that im back to read such a great poem. keep it up like always

I love the second paragraph where you spoke about laughter and how it just keeps you going. You gave this poem a certain persona that was fabulous! I really like this one. I have nothing bad to say about it!
Good job,
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