Lost Heaven [Senryu]

by BlueEyedMystery   Feb 9, 2008


Dark fearful shadows
Rage filled voices are afraid
Heaven is fading

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This Haiku is now a Senryu. Haha. Thanks NyellMoonlight for explaining it to me!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Alvaro

    Beautiful, unique, and wow powerful. heaven fading.. deep..

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Im not familiar with this style of poetry but i think even though it was short and i dont know anything about it..it was kinda right to the point lol...so 5/5 from me.

  • 16 years ago

    by JEFF

    Yeah I didn't understand this way of writing, but it does tell me i have alot to learn about poetry. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Emilline

    WOW! that says so much in so little words! LOVED IT!

  • 16 years ago

    by XxXcrystalXcontagiousXxX

    5 i liked it short but great

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