by Andrew Santarita Feb 9, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
There he stands all alone the cute boy with the green eyes |
by Lady Nik
This was such a sad poem. But very well written. I love the imagery. I think using that made this poem more like a poem. Clever idea. I also like the use of periodic syntax too. Keep it up hun. Nik |
This was an amazing poem. So emotional and powerful. It was amazing. |
Omg, I almost cried. The Emotion I felt was Strong. Honestly. The only work i think it needs is the editing of those boxes and giberish things...I get them alot...xD But once thats fixed, I Should be fine. |
by Hollywood
I liked it but it could use some work |