O My God...i dint know u have that talent in you...that was a beautiful piece to start....i felt the emotion behind the words....Sometimes we need a little sadness, to make us appreciate the good times even more. I have been at this point at one time in my life..WeLL written...much love...

This was very good. I loved the concept and the use of imagery. The flow was smooth and the rhyming didn't seem forced. You did a great job with this poem. I loved the first stanza; it's an attention grabber. Great job! I am looking forward to reading more of your work.

Letty

Hi Luke. Lovely poem. Well done. I loved the vivid imagery and it really made sense to me.
Love Greta x

Great poem luke

Amazing poem. Just. Wow. I'm speechless. :)
5/5