Good, made me shudder!!! <3

So simple yet so effective and sad. Really natural un-forced rhyme. Beautiful. 5/5

Em xXx

Great poem, dark, just how i like em.
i agree with my imperfect creation how the flow of the poem is good.
short but it says everything & hits the spot perfectly.
x

Whoaa...
it bleeds emotion!!! I really like it...My perfect Suicide...wow!! Good job!!
5/5!!

--**Skye~

-Plz check out sum of my poems!!-

Oo I liked it. Short but sweet. I would hope you don't really feel this way. If you could would you please read my poem Another Kid Dies and the Day goes by? If you don't want to I understand. I'm just trying to find more readers and I liked your poem. Five.

I love this poem...i'm putting it in my top poems.

Wow! i really love it! so short but it really does feel like i can relate to it! Awsome! keep it up! xx