Omg i freakin love this poem!!!! it's amazing. i love the whole idea behind it. the details are amazing. excellent....no....superior (hehehe) job on it.

Wow. this is a very vivid and powerful poem. my only suggestions are to spell violin right in the end and keep your verb tense consistant!

5/5! kitty

Hello! I enjoyed reading your writtings. Very much filled with anger and hurt greatly written. Take care