Aww this is really beautiful and so dramatic. I like it. Great poem. It is very touching.

I really enjoyrd this poem it really is a beautiful story. you did a great job on this one.

Beautiful story and very well written. the emotion was truly felt throughout the poem.

This poem wow it started off sad and then a lttle happy and ended in a tragady , how did u do that??? it was one of the best poems i've read.

Wow that was fantastic apsoloutly beautiful, thats one of the best poems i've ever read
great job !!

Love it and especialy the passion 5/5!

I love this story...i am crying again, thanks, lol. this story shows it all. i just cant stand how much this story laid an effect on my heart, i love it though. its so sweet,breath taking,passionate. just wonderful job. i just wish i could write a book about how much i love this poem!!! I LOVE IT!!!<3

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t/c

CourtneyxHolland

5/1000000000 lol.

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The passion in this story was so beautiful and heart touching.i never thought anyone could write like you can.you inspired me like no other thank you for writing this..love is real and when were in it we can't deny it no matter how hard we try too.
~ Eternallover