Inner Turmoil

by brokenmind   Feb 9, 2008


The nothingness of my mind
The feeling of being left behind.
The emptiness that is driven
By this pain that has arisen.
The confusion paralyses me as here I sit
Trying to find the cause of it.
I ache in every inch of my soul
And its really starting to take its toll.
Worthless I have come to be
No future no life is left to see.
As I stare at the cold world through vacant eyes
I'm left dreaming of my own demise.

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  • 16 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    The emptiness is a horrible feeling.
    I love your use of wording that expresses emotion.
    amazing flow
    5.5

  • 16 years ago

    by neo

    Great poem. strong with heaps o feeling :)

  • 16 years ago

    by adam

    Better days are coming......they have to..

  • 16 years ago

    by Morgan

    Wonderful and sad. Unfortunately, I know how you feel