I'm gonna wash you from my life
Like and ugly stain
*-*typo i think u ment like AN ugly stain*-*
Very good poem altho being a guy that REALLY cares about my female friends i hate the fact that u never met a guy that wasn't a jerk. oh well hopfully that will change, plz comment on one of my poems. thank u

Hmm. i really like the beginning.. the flow in the beginning was really good. but towards the middle, it got a little rocky. Toward the end, the stronger vocabulary would make the poem better. :] But in any case, the poem was still great. an enjoyable read. still. 5/5.

I really like this one. it had a good flow to it. I'm glad you've met guys who aren't jerks. (not all of us are) good job tho 5/5

Wow, powerful stuff, especially love the ending. Glad to hear you've met some guys that aren't jerks since you wrote this =)

One thing that I thought might make the flow better:

But no hard feelings
I know how you work
I've never met a
Guy that wasn't a jerk

Maybe moving the word "guy" to the end of the third line. But that's just my way of reading =)

Great poem, 5/5

Em xXx

Hey i liked it alot...i like the disclaimer lol.
i can relate, ive met some pretty mean girls..lol..

My feelings were nothing
But pawns in your game

Those 2 lines are great! and very powerful and also show great imagery!

Nicely written...amazing poem for sure!

So good-bye forever
I'll see you again?
Good-bye whatever
Not even a friend

The ending was really amazing and beautifully written! You can really sense the tension and anger in this poem. You did a great job with it!. 5/5 i love it. Keep it up! =)