A seriously amazing poem. the flow was excellent. the beginning really caught my attention and there's an. .aura around the poem while being read, you know. . anyway. .at first i was gonna say that the third stanza were my favorite lines. but i dunno. I can't pick one! lol. The poem, as a whole, was amazing. .too amazing to simply pick out ONE stanza. :] 5/5 definitely.

Wow. Just freaking awesome!!! I loved every word, the flow is great. A real winning piece you have here.