by Eman D
The first stanza was good and it just got better along the way. 5/5. |
by Eman D
The first stanza was good and it just got better along the way. 5/5. |
by Lemma
Wow this poem gave me shivers! So beautiful and great repetition and rhyme. The first two stanzas are my favourite but I love it all! 5/5 |
I'm hearing this band member sing it and I'm trying REALLLLLY hard to try to remember the song and band I'm thinking of, it's driving me crazy! >_< Well I'll give it a four. I'll search until I find it! ^_^ |
I remember it! I had a different singer but it still had the same gist. Blue October-Hate Me. Whenever I read Give me tonight/give me... I heard it the way he sang Hate me todayyyyyyy.....etc. |
Give me strength, |
by Teria
Once again, you've done an amazing job. it's not one of my favorites by you, but I'm sure that's because it's a love poem, eh. I rarely find a love poem that just blows me away, you know? BUt, this one was awfully close. |
by Krathia
I usually avoid love poems, but I couldn't resist the title. Right off, a great choice. |
by BREEawNUHH
Aw. This is very sweet. I love how you used "Give me.." as the first line in each stanza, but made the third word different. I thought this piece was beautiful. It was completely heartfelt, and I was smiling the whole time I was reading it. |
by iTdOnTmAtTeR
Aww that was rly sweet. i liked it alot. grt job |
by iTdOnTmAtTeR
Aww that was rly sweet. i liked it alot. grt job |