In Your Time

I absolutely love this poem, darling. You did such a wonderful job with it and it gives such hope and inspiration.

Personally, I love this stanza :

" You will stand tall,
Through the hardships and all,
You will find your strength,
That measures no length. "

I think it's my favorite out of the entire poem, though it was all written amazingly.

The last stanza was also written amazingly, it just stuck out more than the rest, I think. (Other than the one I copied and pasted) It's not so much that the two are better, they just stuck out with more meaning and whatnot.

This poem is very meaningful. And beautifully written... The flow was good and I loved the concept.

"You will discover,
Your one true lover,
That is your shining light,
To guide you in the night,"

^ I adore this stanza. It's short, simple, and has a lot of feeling to it.

Great write! 5/5

Wow! This is truly an amazing and inspirational poem.. Everyone needs to read this poem.. it just put a smile on my face and really gives a positive outlook on life. You did an amazing job with this. The flow is perfect and the whole idea is perfect as well.

Amazing job. Keep writing =)

and thanks for taking the time to read my poems. =)

Hiya, firstly thank you for your comment.
Your poem shows off your talent and your enjoyment for writing.
Keep it up

Michael 5/5

Wow, this is amazing. I love your poem, its great! keep it up