Wow this is such an inspirational poem! You're so talented for only 12 (I'm not trying to be patronising, I'm genuinely very impressed). This really made me smile, I needed that today. Great rhyming and it flowed so well.

Thank you =)

5/5

Em xXx

Wow, this is amazing. I love your poem, its great! keep it up

Hiya, firstly thank you for your comment.
Your poem shows off your talent and your enjoyment for writing.
Keep it up

Michael 5/5

Wow! This is truly an amazing and inspirational poem.. Everyone needs to read this poem.. it just put a smile on my face and really gives a positive outlook on life. You did an amazing job with this. The flow is perfect and the whole idea is perfect as well.

Amazing job. Keep writing =)

and thanks for taking the time to read my poems. =)

This poem is very meaningful. And beautifully written... The flow was good and I loved the concept.

"You will discover,
Your one true lover,
That is your shining light,
To guide you in the night,"

^ I adore this stanza. It's short, simple, and has a lot of feeling to it.

Great write! 5/5

I absolutely love this poem, darling. You did such a wonderful job with it and it gives such hope and inspiration.

Personally, I love this stanza :

" You will stand tall,
Through the hardships and all,
You will find your strength,
That measures no length. "

I think it's my favorite out of the entire poem, though it was all written amazingly.

The last stanza was also written amazingly, it just stuck out more than the rest, I think. (Other than the one I copied and pasted) It's not so much that the two are better, they just stuck out with more meaning and whatnot.