by Indian Comma Bean Feb 10, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Promiscuous eyes |
Very powerful. You did great job with rhymes and created very interesting flow through the whole piece. I like this poem a lot- the topic is good and whole piece is truly creative. Great wording, as always, from the beginning to the end. |
by Eman D
Very good and true. 5/5. |