Vampire Smiles

Vampire smiles
the hate in their eyes
hearing their snickers
while you slowly die

Your choking on words
and gasping for air
just don't be afraid
of their vampire stare

Now they smile at you
say you won't feel a thing
put that knife in your heart
and you cried from the sting

Now the skies are all cloudy
with a slight chance of pain
vampire bit your neck
left a hole in your vein

Now just give it a day
for the venom to kick in
then you'll become what you hate
sad vampire fate

This poem really surprised me. Rereading it and it almost doesn't sound like it was written by me. I had no clue that it was going to end with "you" becoming a vampire yourself, it was a pleasant twist. please comment