by Curing the Comon Cliche Feb 10, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Always in my head |
by she
Amazing poem, very buetiful, 5/5 |
by StandStill
Simply lovely. best poem yet. i loved the first adn last stanzas mostest!!! <3 |
by StandStill
Simply lovely. best poem yet. i loved the first adn last stanzas mostest!!! <3 |
Aww, i love it! the ending was just perfect! beautiful flow and choice of words! i wouldn't change a thing about it!! my favorite part was, |
Wow i really like it but i think it goes a bit weird from the last line of the sixth stanza cos it doesnt flow all that well after - sorry! :-$ but otherwise it's seriously good! 4/5 |