Just another desired love poem

by Curing the Comon Cliche   Feb 10, 2008


Always in my head
thoughts of you spin around
I'm not falling in love
Your dragging me down

They say all is fair
in love and in war
you hurt me pretty bad
but i want you more

Happily ever after
happens right after they kiss
just maybe this poem
won't end in a twist

Maybe just once
I'll get the girl in the end
maybe just once
it won't be a dream or pretend

I despise all those books
the ones that speak of romances
cause in the real world
only prince charmings get chances

Kind of a shame
big fat game of love
yeah its only a game
and the winners are players

The ones that can hurt you
without them feeling pain
get a slap to the face
and can do it again

Well I just couldn't do it
Can't end in a twist
Cause I'm not hurt or sad
nope I'm just pissed

WOW i really just let all of this flow out of me. I stepped out of my comfort bubble and made the poem conscious of itself. This poem probably didn't make much sense if you aren't familiar with my style of writing. In the end of all of my poems I make it twist. I joked around with that idea in this poem and i still think i completely twisted where this poem was in the 1st stanza well anyway if your still reading this u obviously have alot of time on your hands so id ask u to use such time on commenting on this poem and/or reading and commenting on another:] thanks

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  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Amazing poem, very buetiful, 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Simply lovely. best poem yet. i loved the first adn last stanzas mostest!!! <3

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Simply lovely. best poem yet. i loved the first adn last stanzas mostest!!! <3

  • 16 years ago

    by MeltInHisArms

    Aww, i love it! the ending was just perfect! beautiful flow and choice of words! i wouldn't change a thing about it!! my favorite part was,
    "Cause I'm not hurt or sad
    nope I'm just pissed"
    that was just perfect! 1,0000000/5 ;)
    xoxo
    ~waiting~

  • 16 years ago

    by xBxRxOxKxExNx

    Wow i really like it but i think it goes a bit weird from the last line of the sixth stanza cos it doesnt flow all that well after - sorry! :-$ but otherwise it's seriously good! 4/5