Yes i know what its like, not of cause to be in your mind but ive experinced alot of what you say.
this is a great poem btw!!!

take care x

Very emotive, i quite liked it.

Where you reap what you sew only to find it's eating you from the inside out?
THIS IS A REALLY GREAT LINE

This is good, you should consider writing this as a song babe, it has a good flow.

well done xx