I'm watching you. Let's be married.

by Krystal   Feb 10, 2008


He followed her home and he watched her sleep,
He really did love her, he really cared,
He believed she was his alone to keep.
He believed an Angel had had them paired.

He really did love her with all his heart,
He really did think they were meant to be.
He thought that nothing could tear them apart.
He never did think �This just might be me�

He became obsessed, and his heart pounded,
Prepared to confess his feelings of love,
She lay in his truck, her wrists tightly bound,
He believed she was his saint from above.

As she took her last breath he slowly cried,
A tragic ending; together they died.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ezzey

    I liked the ending ,although it was so sad, i guess you have a special smoothe style at poetry ,i'm really getting amazed with your unique style ,where no complx words ,all are so simple and nuderstood ,yet so emotional and direct !!
    you' re one of my favroite !!

  • 16 years ago

    by Harutan

    This is really good, the way it's written makes you sorta see whats going on inside his head(unless im mistaken), nice touch.

    Also, i didnt understand what was going on until the volta >w< , so, well done 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    I am reading again and again trying to find the step of the veiw and finally see the picture and my heart dropped and thought "I couldn't imagine seeing that in a real life"

  • 16 years ago

    by Edward Latina

    Very good flow and word choice. The ending was a bit abrupt, but still its a small thing against this poem. Very good work, good job! 5/5

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