Aww... that was soo sweet. I was so sure he wasn't going to catch her at the end but he did! I really enjoyed that very much. Usually poems have sad endings, do it's nice to see a change! :]]

Cayce xx

Thats so sweet, love the poem.

5/5

Awwwwwwwwwwwww ....... this is such a sweet poem.... i loved the ending.. it made me smile.... when i read the ending i was like oh wow... i dont know why but the words "you caught me" really stuck to me.

you did a great job as usual. 5/5

That was awesome
but i think it needs
a finishing line
like- and she was
happy once again-
I only think that
because i think that
it will wrap this wonderfuly
written poem up. it
is just a suggestion
so you don't have to
do it. anyway thanks 4
the read
*_*