Pond Slime

by Lemma   Feb 10, 2008


This is a super-old one I found on my laptop from summer '06

You are
Wet dripping
Green oozing
Heart breaking
Soul bruising
Spirit crushing
Self masking
Strength harming
Evil basking
Smile smudging
Trust choking
Fear provoking
Faith cloaking
Pond slime

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Again, this is not about my boyfriend whom I love very much and who will hopefully be reading these in a short while.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Live WeLL

    This is great! and veryyy fun to read.. awesome job.. you have talent . keep it up =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Invisible Shadow

    Good flow to it. i love the rhyming seam too

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    I never read a poem like this before. It was one lovely poem and gave so much meaning to it. Friendship....i give you 5/5.

    -Sarah A.

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    That was short and sweet. The flow was really good, and I liked the wording. There's not too much more to say. I loved it!

    Cayce xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    Lol Nice flow
    XD
    Great job

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