by emiley
Omg i love this poem! it has great feeling! i can so relate to it! great job! keep up the great work, your a great poet! |
Wow, this is terrific! You put so much emotion and feeling in it, it made it amazing! You really drew me into this poem and kept me reading! Oh, and when you put a comma in your poem, just put a space after it so it makes it easier to read. Nice job, take care! |
Wow! This one is beautiful! |
by Lori
That was really good! |
by PoetryKnight
This is an excellent poem. keep it up and I shall always read, you fan, your friend, you poet, Poetry Knight |
Wow this is a really amazing poem it is now on my favorite poem's list |
by Heba
OH,I can deeply feel your pain,coz there are many ppl who hurt me too and tore my heart apart.I was stunned when I read the word<<doll>> and I do really understand and know why you called your self this name.Now, you only have to forget about them and think only about ur self,be a lil bit selfish;)... |
by Yeka
This poem is really sad and to darkness. love it yes but to darkness about loving someone (^_^) 5/5 |