Comments : Not today

  • 16 years ago

    by emiley

    Omg i love this poem! it has great feeling! i can so relate to it! great job! keep up the great work, your a great poet!
    (thanks for commenting my poem)

    love Emmy

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Wow, this is terrific! You put so much emotion and feeling in it, it made it amazing! You really drew me into this poem and kept me reading! Oh, and when you put a comma in your poem, just put a space after it so it makes it easier to read. Nice job, take care!

  • 16 years ago

    by Melody Christina

    Wow! This one is beautiful!

    ~Melody~ =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Lori

    That was really good!
    "Here we go again and you're going to stay
    just keep saying that love brought you back to me
    But sorry,It's the end of the day and it's time to go away"

    -"here go again, your going to stay"
    I LOVE THAT LINE! lol awesome job!

  • 16 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    This is an excellent poem. keep it up and I shall always read, you fan, your friend, you poet, Poetry Knight
    A.K.A
    AaronJoshua

  • 16 years ago

    by A Phoenyx in Flight

    Wow this is a really amazing poem it is now on my favorite poem's list
    keep up the amazinmg work

  • 16 years ago

    by Heba

    OH,I can deeply feel your pain,coz there are many ppl who hurt me too and tore my heart apart.I was stunned when I read the word<<doll>> and I do really understand and know why you called your self this name.Now, you only have to forget about them and think only about ur self,be a lil bit selfish;)...

    WELL DONE5\5...

  • 16 years ago

    by Yeka

    This poem is really sad and to darkness. love it yes but to darkness about loving someone (^_^) 5/5