by HaileyHelen Feb 10, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
I hope my tears |
by Teria
It's a good poem. Not your best, I think it could be broken up into stanzas. Some lines could be a bit longer, some are fine how they are. It needs work but it's a really good poem and you've definitely improved since Feb. |
Excellent poem is "Everything is a discrace" suppose to be Everything is a disgrace |
" hope my tears |