" hope my tears
Fall down upon you
So that all my fears
Can become yours too"

liked those lines more

good poem with emtions

hope everything is alright

Excellent poem is "Everything is a discrace" suppose to be Everything is a disgrace

It's a good poem. Not your best, I think it could be broken up into stanzas. Some lines could be a bit longer, some are fine how they are. It needs work but it's a really good poem and you've definitely improved since Feb.

Good write, though. A different emotion that usual. Which was kind of nice.