This was a very, very creative poem. I loved the imagery and the flow of it also. There is only one problem with it, you contradicted yourself in it. in the third line you say "In the circular rotation I don't notice a single thing around me"; but yet you go on to explain your surroundings in the following lines. I think that you should change the third line to:

In the circular rotation I notice every single thing around me.

Overall this is a fantastic poem and I think you did a great job of conveying your meaning. Keep up the great work!

Letty

Hiya,
a lovely poem painted wtih many vivid colours.

Michael